I can remember a time when we won a game it all started when we arrived at the park we got ready to play. I was so excited the whistle blew and the game started I tried hitting the goal many times but I always miss at least we scored a goal already. The game is half way through and we have scored 3 already and the other team is catching up they only need two to be in the lead few minutes later the game ended and our team won we finally won a game! I was so happy but I heard some more good news I am the player of the day! everyone was leaving so we left to we went on to the bus and went back to school
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Friday, August 16, 2019
The big win!
I can remember a time when we won a game it all started when we arrived at the park we got ready to play. I was so excited the whistle blew and the game started I tried hitting the goal many times but I always miss at least we scored a goal already. The game is half way through and we have scored 3 already and the other team is catching up they only need two to be in the lead few minutes later the game ended and our team won we finally won a game! I was so happy but I heard some more good news I am the player of the day! everyone was leaving so we left to we went on to the bus and went back to school
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This is amazing because you won your game and I also play on fridays to at Hagley park and I play netball.
ReplyDeleteDid you know I like Panthers and that means I like your team name
Next time, you could tell us a bit more information like what day it was or where you played
Why does the panther look like a cat.
Thanks for sharing this post Gabrielle, I enjoyed reading it. Sounds like you persevered well. I do tap dancing in a veterans dance group which I love. What sport do you think you will play next year?
ReplyDeleteWOW Gabrielle that is awesome how many games did you win? from Ebony
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